August 2, 2012

  • we were in china
    long flight
    re routed
    multiple times

    roach motel
    tired
    30 hours being awake

    luggage lost
    language barrier
    failed attempts at smiling
    and conveying compassion

    Beijing blanketed in enough fog
    there was no way
    we were leaving tonight

    i slept in my clothes
    as i peeled back my single bed
    one layer at a time
    checking for roaches
    or any other creature
    that might prefer the warmth of my bed

    as opposed to the stained carpet
    the 1960′s decor
    and the fluorescent lighting
    that flickered at random
    with no particular pattern in mind

    what i wouldn’t give for a shot of vodka
    a cigarette
    or a warm shower
    that doesn’t require me to keep my mouth closed
    from dysentery

    or my tooth brush rinsed with bottled water
    and a random tube of tooth paste
    that reads in a language

    i know so very little about.

Comments (4)

  • “Beijing blanketed in enough fog
    there was no way
    we were leaving tonight”

    i am in love with this line.

  • I really like this poem. It speaks volume about what’s not being spoken.

  • @awoolham - it’s a very different place. that sounds like such a blanket statement. but after being there twice now. both being two week trips; in many parts of china. we are so lucky to live in the u.s.a. I’m thinking of writing a book of poems around it. and my two sons adoptions from there.

  • @thomas_michael – sounds like a very interesting experience especially when you put in context with the purpose of finding/getting/receiving your sons. What a surreal experience. I would love to read the book of poems if you publish it.

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